I recently had the privilege of reading a book called Desolation :The Keystone Bone Trilogy Volume 1 by an author I had never heard of previously, Jesper Schmidt. Essentially, it was a fantasy adventure, or more a fantasy with a bit of adventure. There are a few characters. First and foremost, and my favorite, there is a man from a, basically, extinct species of nearly imperishable and stubborn half demon/half dragons. He is intelligent, honorable, honest, strong and defiant when he believes he must be. Then there is Aea, who comes from an ancient race of war expert tree dwelling people. She has been sidelined and classified an outsider by her people, because when she was six her father was executed as a thief. Her journey begins when her mother appears after many years of disappearance and sends her to find her sister. Third, there is a second young woman from the same tree people who is enrolled to become a sorceress one day, however, she has been an apprentice for longer than any other in history. When an ancient ArchDemon is about to escape his binds, the ancient halfling is sent on a quest to find some way to assuage the situation. What will become of the three as they are all three forced into uncomfortable territories?
This I will say about the book; I liked the masculine character, because his mind was very adult, slow to anger and caught between a mountain of stimuli from many other characters which should have him walking on pins and needles, however, his pride would not allow him to get sucked up into drama which was unfolding all around him. Instead, he thought his problems through, would not concern himself with the subjugations of lesser or even greater characters attempting to assert dominance over him and even put said characters back into place when the time called for it. I actually enjoy his demeanor very much. In fact, I employ it quite often in my own works. Second, the young sorceress, I think, was a well thought out character. I liked her very much, however, really, it’s with the female characters that I begin to see problems. In the beginning, so many terrible things happen to the main character (Who I believe is the main character), Aea, and so many events occur at simply just the correct time, which seem to cause a rift between the realm of possibility and probability in the book. I feel at occasional points that certain characters were meant to expire, but the timeline was rewritten because it was decided to keep them. I feel like in certain places of the book, an event was supposed to transpire, in fact there were multiple occasions where it should have, in a specific cell for certain, and it simply never did, even given multiple occasions, and the reason seems to be because another route was simply thought up, possibly to extend the book, or because there were certain details the author wanted to work into the book and was looking to tweak the storyline to cause it to occur. For a number of reasons, it simply did not flow. I liked it and I definitely think the author is on to something, however, I think it would do a great deal of justice to revisite. However, as the title of the site implies, I’m a Nobody Loser…